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I figured this selection from "Balance of Power" explained it best.
What follows contains minor spoilers for the fic:
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Chapter 10 (about halfway through)

There were supposed to be 1000 balls of paint for each of them, and the hoppers held approximately 200 rounds. Ed had reloaded twice already, which meant 600 rounds. He estimated Hughes had only reloaded once.

Hughes should have been nearly covered in bright red paint. Ed looked down at himself and sighed. At least as covered as I am, he thought. But he wasn’t. In fact, Hughes barely had a mark on him, which only served to slam home the fact that Ed couldn’t shoot his way out of a wet paper bag. It didn’t help matters that Ed couldn’t sneak up on a deaf man, either.

He cautiously peeked around the corner of the shed, peering with one eye in the direction of Hughes’s last known position. He thought he caught movement behind the bush and grinned. Maybe I’ll finally catch him off-guard.

Ever since the game had started, Ed had been more and more in tune to the subtler sounds around him. It was self-preservation, after all. Hughes was one sneaky bastard, and the man seemed to take great joy in ambushing Ed. So when he started to creep out of hiding to take what he thought was Hughes hiding behind the bush and heard a barely-there sound, he knew he was done for. But he wasn’t going out without a fight, damnit.

Ed spun, gun at the ready, finger on the trigger; and was hit square in the chest. Again. He’d overbalanced when he reacted, firing wild, and fell back on his ass. Not a single shot hitting his opponent.

“Damnit! Why can’t I hit you?” Ed yelled as the other man disappeared around the shed.

“Because your aim sucks, noob!”

Ed blinked. He really has been here too long, he thought with a laugh.

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sweet... like the way the t-shirt was done :D

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I LOVE the detail work you lavished on Ed's clothes. Particularly that T-shirt. I don't think Reilly picked that one out for him.

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Nothing like stealing from my own gallery! LOL! And thank you!

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Not at al- Ed totally picked it out himself! And thank you!

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So, he's not the self-absorbed alchemy geek we thought he was. He's just a normal guy who is secretly interested in boobs - just like Havoc. *snark*

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Well..... YEAH! :D

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So...when he finally sees Winry again, will he just shake her hand and say "Nice to see you again, machinery geek."?

or, will it be:

Ed's cheeks flushed a dull red as he sheepishly ducked his head. He looked up at Winry from between the hairs of his bangs, "Hi, machinery geek," he mumbled.

Everyone was staring at him, well, everyone but Ducky who was gawking at Winry's chest until Heist punched his shoulder. Al was also embaressed by the sudden silence and he felt his brother's awkwardness. So he punched Ducky's other shoulder. It seemed ganging up on the tech geek was the right thing to do.

Ed felt he had to DO something, like WHAT? Shake her hand, maybe? In a snap decision, he straightened up and threw his arms around Winry.

He lifted her off her feet and twirled her in one complete circle before he set her back down on her feet. "I missed you," he murmured before proving it by pressing his lips to hers.

Winry's eyes widened briefly before she returned the kiss. Tom coughed discreetly into his fist, then jerked his head at Reilly as if to say, Let's go over there.

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Woot!!!!

I likes it!!!

You should post this at BOP Crackfic: [link]

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Pfft. I'm wary of doing it because my last attempt at crackfic didn't go very well. I want to go back and re-write the scene with the punk!alter!Winry. Because it turned out better than the Ed-kicks-the-jukebox bit.

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